At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situations outweigh the disadvantages?

Following graduation, the pie chart displays the jobs that Anthropology
graduates
held, and the table displays their salaries after five years of
employment
in three different industries.
Overall
, it is evident that most
graduates
found
employment
after completing their degree program, with the biggest percentage finding full-time work. Despite being a modest percentage, the number of people who finished their education was lower and on par with the unemployment rate. On average, people in
employment
made over $75,000 per year,
although
those working for the government and as independent contractors made more money than those employed by for-profit businesses. A little more than half of the
graduates
had full-time jobs,
according to
the pie chart,
while
the percentages of part-timers and the unemployed were much lower (15% and 12%, respectively). The lowest percentages were for those combining part-time
employment
and higher education study, at only 5%.
In contrast
, the figures for postgraduate studies or unspecified occupations were identical (8% each).
Due to
this
, of those who had a definite destination, around three-quarters were in
employment
,
while
the remaining eight were either in education or unemployed.
According to
the chart,
graduates
working for private companies had the lowest pay, with nearly half receiving wages between $25 and $74,999, 25% receiving $75 to $99,999, and only 30% receiving earnings exceeding $100,000. 5% of freelancers and government employees made between $25,000 and $49,999, 15% made between $50,000 and $74,999, and the remaining 80% made between $75,000 and more than $100,000.
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