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more and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on endangered list. what are the reasons?

#animals #verge #extinction #list
In the world, one of the most beautiful species
are
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animals
.
World
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 is for them
also
. In the modern era,increasing in the endangered list and
extinction
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the extinction
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 of wild
animals
 are more. To some extent, human activities are the cause of
this
 global Issue.
This
disquistion
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discussion
 delineates the cause,effect,suggestions and possible solutions for the
dilimma
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dilemma
. Generally speaking, People are very selfish. They don't want to know what problems happening on the other side. Society
torture
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animals
 for their
self needs
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.
For instance
, some of the perfumes available in the market
is
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are
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 produced from
animals
. For the
preparation
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 they are killing
animals
.
Substains
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Sustains
 like leather,blankets,
clothes
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and clothes
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 are coming from
animals
. we all know that it is human needs but, by doing
this
 the list of endangered wild
animals
are
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 increasing.
Instead
for
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 harming the
animals
,we need to do research for an alternate
sollution
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solution
 for making
these kind
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 of things. In India deer are
in
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 the endangered list still people are hunting deer for making odour things. Countries should
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strong
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the
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rules and
punshiment
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punishment
punishments
 for saving the
animals
.
Other
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 reason for
extinction
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the extinction
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animals
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of animals
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 is human
carelesness
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carelessness
, To cite an example, Driving
vechiles
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vehicles
 through some restricted
forest
area
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areas
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.
Thers
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There
 is
high
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a high
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 chance of hitting
animals
. Throwing things like plastic in the sea. It will
effect
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affect
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 the underwater species and some people do even more
cruelity
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cruelty
 to the
animals
. Sometimes they camped in the
forest
 and make food. A spark of fire is enough for destroying the whole
forest
 and the
animals
 in the
forest
 will
also
 die.
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Government
Goverment
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 and
public
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the public
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 are equally responsible for
animals
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animal
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extinction
. The constitution for animal rights should focus more
in
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on
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 it. They should give
punshiment
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punishment
punishments
 like imprisonment and huge fines need to implement.
To conclude
, Government should implement some
awarness
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awareness
programes
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programmes
programs
to
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 the Public for saving
extinction
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the extinction
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wild
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of wild
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animal
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animals
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.
Hopefully
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 in
future
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this
 issue will vanish
of
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from
world
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