Your child is going on a trip to another country for 3 days. School is looking for some parents who can join the trip and you decided to apply for the same. You are interested in going with trip. Write a letter to the head of the school and include: – Why you want to join the team – What you can do to assist – Queries related to the trip.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my keen interest in joining the school excursion published on the school website

last

weekend.

Firstly

, I look forward to travelling with my son to China but have not gotten

such

an opportunity

due to

unforeseen circumstances,

thus

I will be glad to join the trip as

this

could be a way of fulfilling my promise to my son.

Secondly

, I have stayed in China for several years and I must say that I have full knowledge when it comes to their traditions and customs,

therefore

, it could be a plus for me to assist in organizing the tour and standing in as the communicator when we get there since I speak Mandarin fluently.

Furthermore

, I would like to ask a few queries about the journey which include; what could be the total cost of the flight? What arrangements have been made concerning the food and accommodation by the academy management? I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Grace Joy

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