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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people think that we should divide students based on their academic ability, while others think we should educate all students together. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

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Academic success Nowadays, the idea of separating
the
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students
according to
 their capabilities has been popular.
Whereas
, many people find it useless. should the student be divided
due to
 their academic levels ?
This
 essay will discuss both opinions with examples and evidence. The educational abilities are
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 the same for all
students
.
For instance
, many of us find
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scientific
subjects
 difficult.
On the other hand
, some people may be talented at these
subjects
.
As a result
, separation is the solution, learners should
study
 what they
interested
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on
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.
Furthermore
, Improve
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 knowledge, If you
study
 in a major of your choice, will be easier
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you
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understand, which will develop your academic value, as scientists have approved. Contrary to what to all of these advantages, many people see that the partitions of the student may lead to many issues.
For example
, societal problems,
while
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study
 a hard major
better
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 than others.
Also
,
mental
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 issues,
students
 will be restricted to their majors, making boundaries of innovations.
In other words
, unless they
study
 all of the
subjects
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in
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 early
ages
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, they will never have a passion for a variety of educational majors.
To conclude
, banning
the
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students
 to
study
 all the
subjects
 is not essential at a young age.
Although
,
conventional
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 way of school is more beneficial to the learners.
Also
, the rate of intelligence will increase in society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic ability
  • tailored instruction
  • high-achieving students
  • low-achieving students
  • competitive environment
  • inequality
  • unfair treatment
  • elitism
  • division
  • social interactions
  • diversity
  • inclusivity
  • equal opportunities
  • collaboration
  • peer learning
  • community
  • social cohesion
  • diverse needs
  • individualized attention
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