You have visited another city in your country. Prior to the visit you requested some information from a tourist centre, but the information was incorrect. Write a letter to the manager of the centre and say - What information were you looking for? - What was incorrect in it? - What happened to you because of it.

#city #country #visit #information #tourist #centre #manager

Dear Sir/Madam My name is Injun lee booked

for

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visit

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the Aqua tourism

centre

in Sydney two weeks ago. I and my wife are supposed to travel to the

centre

on 25 March but, I found that the information that I requested is inaccurate in the email that you sent me on 17 March. Please allow me to let you the incorrect part of the information. On the day of the reservation, I require you to send me the correct address which is not available to find through Google Maps.

Although

you emailed me with the new address of the

centre

however

, I am still having difficulty figuring out where the location is.

Also

, the price that shows on your website is $300 for a family booking but, it says only $230 for a couple on the Google service of your

centre

. As my and wife could be regarded as either a couple or a family, I will really appreciate it if you confirm which option will be applied to my current circumstance before I make a payment. Honestly, because of these issues, we are hesitating to drop by the

centre

which we are interested in visiting the place. I understand the reputation of the

centre

as one of the famous tourist places in Sydney but, I am struggling with budgeting to travel to Sydney for 7 days with my wife. The price gap on your website makes me comparatively confused to make a decision. I wish you to email me with the correct location and the price of the tourism

centre

. Kind regards Injun Lee

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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6 paragraphs

266 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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