Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balance diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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one
of the top priorities for human being these days . Use synonyms
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think
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both
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the predominant
for
a better physique and mental Change preposition
in
health
as well .
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one
hand , people in the favour of Use synonyms
exercise
to maintain a sound Use synonyms
body
cite various reasons . Use synonyms
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workout
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the workout
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on at
at
daily basis . Correct your spelling
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ending
into
causing obesity .Change preposition
apply
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in
health
ailments related to Use synonyms
cardiac
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the cardiac
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substances
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veins ,Change preposition
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consequently
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clogging
whic
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which
effects
the circulation of blood and Correct your spelling
affects
cause
heart attacks . To cite an example , Wrong verb form
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Health
Organisation , 90% of Use synonyms
paitents
are suffering from chronic heart diseases only Correct your spelling
patients
due to
avoiding Linking Words
of
daily basis Change preposition
apply
exercise
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, devoting Linking Words
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time to Correct article usage
apply
workout
would Correct your spelling
work out
results
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result
into
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in
development
of Correct article usage
the development
better
physique . Add an article
the better
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, to build up their personalities people prefer to do specific exercises Linking Words
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on at
at
daily basis .
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a
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also
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apply
indispensible
part of a Correct your spelling
indispensable
disease free
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disease-free
body
.Use synonyms
Balanced
diet can be defined as Add an article
A balanced
appropriate
intake of proper proteins , carbohydrates and vitamins on Correct article usage
an appropriate
an
average for Correct article usage
apply
both
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the
males and females and if Correct article usage
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one
is not including the proper meals in their daily routine could suffer from malnutrition Use synonyms
and
leads to many other acute Correct word choice
which
health
ailments . Use synonyms
Furthermore
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due to
advanced technology , people are Linking Words
adapting
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adopting
sedantary
lifestyles these days and they are giving priority to fast foods to save Correct your spelling
sedentary
their
time and hassle , but in reality ,they are giving Correct pronoun usage
apply
invitation
to bad Add an article
an invitation
the invitation
health
.
In my point of view , Use synonyms
both
factors are equally important to maintain a healthy Use synonyms
body
, none Use synonyms
from
Change preposition
of
both
can be ignored . Use synonyms
Both
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the
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apply
exercise
and proper nutrition should go simultaneously , to Use synonyms
bulid
a perfect Correct your spelling
build
body
not only from Use synonyms
appearance
but Add an article
the appearance
also
from tissue level .
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To conclude
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both
aspects are crucial for Use synonyms
a
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apply
health
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a
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Although
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exercise
can prevent us from Use synonyms
health
disorders , Use synonyms
but
without proper meals ,Remove the conjunction
apply
one
can not be able to Use synonyms
acheive
a healthy Correct your spelling
achieve
body
. We can not underestimate any factor from them , so individuals should involve Use synonyms
both
of them in their daily routine .Use synonyms
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