The chart below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy

The pie chart compares data about the main factors to make them happy
according to
two age groups (under and over 30) There are several similarities between young and old community says makes them happier.
However
, there are several striking differences.
Firstly
, let us look at the similarities. It is noticeable that for both younger and older people, the highest percentage says that achievement at work brings them the most delight:31%for the younger as well 32%for the older group. Doing hobbies is
also
very important for both groups. The second largest percentage of both age groups is Hobbies. Turning now to differences, Much younger folk regard having a good appearance as extremely important which is 18% of the state
this
brings the most peace of mind.
This
is followed by 15% who state that travel brings them bliss. Neither of the two factors is mentioned by older people. 20% of older people report that having financial security is most important to their prosperity and 14 of them feel happier when they are with the family.
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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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