People are surrounded by advertisement which has an increased effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this o3utweigh the negative effects?
It is evident that
advertisements
greatly influenced 21st-century human life .To me, watching advertisements
through new technology creates many positive outcomes than negative outcomes. In the essay, I will explain this
topic with relevant examples.
To begin
,there are many positive outcomes vested on
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advertisement
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the advertisement
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Firstly
, it helps customers to analyze which products
are good or Which products
are more economic
friendly .To illustrate Change the word
economically
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, recently Indian government enacted a law ,named consumer
protection act in which it Correct article usage
the consumer
is
specified that all Unnecessary verb
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advertisements
should specify clear descriptions of products
and it should be liable. Therefore
, people
can make a good choice of buying product
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products
Secondly
, through an
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advertisement
many new Add a comma
,advertisement
products
reached even remote areas and people
can buy any branded items in their own local market. Thirdly
, it will helps
to boost industries and raw material manufacturers to develop new technology and service Change the verb form
help
among
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for
whole
world.
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Moreover
, it brings some negative effects on society like people
invest
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investing
on
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products
because they are attracted to the words of celebrities or famous people
's opinion
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opinions
For example
, in America 75% of cosmetic products
sellings are reached high during the last
3 years because of the citizen's higher influence on advertisement
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the advertisement
an advertisement
Consequently
, higher
rate of consumerism reduced the value Correct article usage
a higher
ofself
dependency and will shift society into more dependable to other economic sources. Correct your spelling
of self
On the other hand
, it brings more competition and misunderstanding among
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people
but also
with
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the
multi-million companies.
To summarize, There is a saying 'a bird without wings' Correct article usage
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similarly
now advertisements
are considered as
a part of human life .Change preposition
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Therefore
, it had a huge impact on the views of people
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