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In many countries, women and men both work full-time. It is logical for men and women to share household chores equally (eg. cleaning and looking after children). To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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With both
men
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 and
women
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 working full
time
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 nowadays in numerous countries,
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 is a thought-provoking question that whether
they
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should equal amount of
housework
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 should be allocated to
men
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 and
women
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. I find myself almost in total agreement. One argument in
favor
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 of couples being supposed to equally allocate
housework
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 contend that
this
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 gives them an advantage in terms of efficiency. After work, couples could finish
housework
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 efficaciously and quickly by sharing
works
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 equally.
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 allows them to have more free
time
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 in the evening or day times during which they could partake in activities like playing sports and watching movies
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 aimed to wind down.
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, not only can they mitigate their physical fatigue, but
also
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 they are provided with an opportunity to improve their relationship. Another advantage could be explained by the fact that doing
housework
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 is able to get rid of one being tempted into an unhealthy
life style
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lifestyle
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. In accordance with the
researches
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, in some countries,
men
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 never do
house work
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housework
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,
having
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and having
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 a sedentary
life style
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lifestyle
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 in the offices, which causes backache, obesity and high blood pressure. In comparison,
women
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 need to stay at home all day long to take care of babies, clean the houses and pick their
children
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 up from
schools
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,
thus
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felling
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feeling
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 exhausting even uncomfortable almost every day. Doing
housework
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 regularly could be considered as doing sports and a conducive way of relaxation for
men
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whereas
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 less workload could compromise
women
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’s tiredness. Indeed,
women
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cold
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could
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 be born with certain faculties that make them suitable to do certain works,
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, taking care of babies.
Women
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 might be more capable than
men
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 of communicating with their
children
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, fostering
children
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’s values and installing high moral standards of them on account of their being emotional and sympathetic
with
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 what
children
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 are conceiving about.
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, it is
women
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 who should
spent
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time
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 on parenting. In conclusion, even if
women
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 are better at taking care of
children
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 insomuch as they are sympathetic
with
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 their
children
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’s
feeling
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feelings
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, personally speaking, it is more plausible for
men
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 and
women
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allocate
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to allocate
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housework
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 equally because of more free
time
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 to relax
as well as
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 improving physical soundness.
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