In many countries, women and men both work full-time. It is logical for men and women to share household chores equally (eg. cleaning and looking after children). To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

With both
men
and
women
working full
time
nowadays in numerous countries,
such
is a thought-provoking question that whether
they
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should equal amount of
housework
should be allocated to
men
and
women
. I find myself almost in total agreement. One argument in
favor
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of couples being supposed to equally allocate
housework
contend that
this
gives them an advantage in terms of efficiency. After work, couples could finish
housework
efficaciously and quickly by sharing
works
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equally.
This
allows them to have more free
time
in the evening or day times during which they could partake in activities like playing sports and watching movies
together with
aimed to wind down.
Consequently
, not only can they mitigate their physical fatigue, but
also
they are provided with an opportunity to improve their relationship. Another advantage could be explained by the fact that doing
housework
is able to get rid of one being tempted into an unhealthy
life style
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. In accordance with the
researches
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, in some countries,
men
never do
house work
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housework
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,
having
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and having
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a sedentary
life style
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in the offices, which causes backache, obesity and high blood pressure. In comparison,
women
need to stay at home all day long to take care of babies, clean the houses and pick their
children
up from
schools
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,
thus
felling
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exhausting even uncomfortable almost every day. Doing
housework
regularly could be considered as doing sports and a conducive way of relaxation for
men
whereas
less workload could compromise
women
’s tiredness. Indeed,
women
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be born with certain faculties that make them suitable to do certain works,
for example
, taking care of babies.
Women
might be more capable than
men
of communicating with their
children
, fostering
children
’s values and installing high moral standards of them on account of their being emotional and sympathetic
with
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what
children
are conceiving about.
Therefore
, it is
women
who should
spent
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time
on parenting. In conclusion, even if
women
are better at taking care of
children
insomuch as they are sympathetic
with
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their
children
’s
feeling
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, personally speaking, it is more plausible for
men
and
women
allocate
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housework
equally because of more free
time
to relax
as well as
improving physical soundness.
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