TASK 2: Young people are now spending more and more time and money following fashion trends. What is your opinion? Is this a positive or negative development?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate

whether

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at present it takes the young more

time

and more

money

to pursue fashionable

trends

.

This

phenomenon has both pros and cons;

however

, its advantage may outweigh its disadvantage. In my opinion, young

people

should not waste much

time

and

money

on pursuing hot

trends

.

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a shadow of a doubt, catching up with the niche fashionable

trends

brings a number of upsides. Nowadays,

youths

purchase a great volume of fashion items in order to boost their self-confidence and leave a decent impression on others.

Moreover

, a good-looking appearance can bring them a great many merits in

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life and their career.

For example

,

modeling

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is one of the jobs having a high requirement to upgrade a great deal of newly fashionable

trends

.

Additionally

, if the

modelings

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modellings

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want to be booked by prestigious branches, they must have the best impressions of the brands.

Hence

, it is necessary for young

people

to spend more

time

and

money

to run famous

trends

While

the redeeming features of spending more

time

and more

money

are widely acknowledged, its counterpart still lingers.

Instead

of investing in studying or working,

youths

waste a lot of

time

and

money

to research

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the latest trend and

buy

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fashionable categories beyond their budget, followed by trying to become fashionistas and celebrities.

For example

, given that Dior

launches

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a prohibitive new collection to prove the class of successful

people

,

youths

buy the Dior Lady

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worth 200 dollars to catch up with the trend. That becomes a tremendous financial burden for their family.

Therefore

,

the

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more

time

and

money

wasted in pursuing

the

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fashionable

trends

brings a number of disadvantages for younger

people

.

To sum up

,

although

the upsides of catching up with fashionable

trends

helps

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the young become more confident, the downsides of keeping up with them

makes

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them become a burden to their family. In my opinion, spending a great amount of

time

and

money

is not essential for

youths

.