The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph displays
infromation
about the Correct your spelling
information
number
of Use synonyms
car
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trip
into the central city made by Fix the agreement mistake
trips
residents
and non-Use synonyms
residents
from 1998 to 2005.
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number
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car
journeys Use synonyms
in
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by
residents
saw a slight Use synonyms
grow
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while
in the next periods witnessed a significant decrease. Linking Words
Moreover
, the biggest Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
car
trips in the first periods showed a gradual increase for years.
The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
car
tours into the city Use synonyms
center
showed a gradual decline between 1998 and 2000, from almost 10000 to 5000 Change the spelling
centre
of
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apply
Residents
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while
there was a significant increase in the proportion of Linking Words
car
journeys from under 5000 to almost 8000 Use synonyms
of
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apply
Residents
.
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On the other hand
, the figure for cars tours presented a gradual decrease between 2001 and 2005, from under 5000 to 4000, Linking Words
whereas
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
car
journeys witnessed a significant decline from 8000 to 5000 Use synonyms
of
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for
Residents
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simillary
the same with Correct your spelling
similar
Residents
in the Use synonyms
last
Linking Words
years
.Correct quantifier usage
few years
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