The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

      

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of the habit of purchasing and drinking
coffee
and tea by residents in Sydney , Melbourne , Brisban ,Adelaide and
Hobart
.
Overall
, it can be seen clearly that
Hobart
is the city in which the proportion of buying fresh
coffee
and instant
coffee
in the
last
4
weeks
and going to a cafe for caffeine or tea in the
last
4
weeks
is the highest compared to that of the four remaining cities . Looking at the graph for more detail , Sydney ,Melbourne and
Hobart
are three metropolitans which have the highest figure for travelling to the cafe shop to have a
coffee
or tea in the
last
4
weeks
, standing at around 60% . These figures are followed by nearly 55% and 40% of Brisban and Adelaide respectively . In terms of the instant
coffee
bought by citizens in the
last
4
weeks
, approximately 51% is witnessed in three cities namely Brisban , Adelaide and
Hobart
.
This
figure for that in the two other cities is lower , at 48% in Melbourne and about 40% in Sydney .
Such
dramatic differences are not noticed in the proportion of fresh
coffee
consumed by residents in all
center
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, with around 40% in total.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, hobart, weeks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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