The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevat

The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevat
Given are four pie charts which indicate the different ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and 2050 . It is obvious that the majority of people , except Yeman in 2000 , the three rest of the components are composed by the age of 15-59. To look closely at these figures, in 2000, the children which were 0-14
years
old held the most,with a proportion of 50.1% , more than half , yet is expected to decrease by 13.1% in the future 2050.For 15-59
years
old , 46.3% was in 2000 , increase the percentage to 57.3% in the year 2050 .
However
, the least number , for those over 60
years
old , remains the
last
at 3.6% and 5.7% , climbing a bit in 2050.
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Moreover
, for Italy's studies , the biggest proportion in both
years
is middle age , 61.6 and 46.2 in 2000 and 2050 relatively . The youngsters of 0-14
years
old , fluctuated
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% to 11.5% in the later 50
years
. The
last
figure which is above the 60s has a noticeable rise from 24.1 to 42.3% ,almost double the pie graph.
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