The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of thefts vehicles in Great Britain,Sweden
,France
and Canada
between 1990 and 1999.
Overall
,in the beginning,Sweden
,France
and Canada
had amounts less than 10 thousand
,while
Great Britain had a number
between 15 and 20 thousand
.
To begin
,the general trends of the three counties were close,however
,while
Sweden
and Canada
had a gentle fall,France
started to rise
.Due to
this
,in 1991,France
started to decrease and at the same time,Sweden
became an increasing country.After that year,France
and Canada
continued to fall,while
Sweden
grow from year to year.However
,in 1993 two outsiders had a change,the number
of thefts started to grow and did apply till 1995 in France
and till 1999 in Canada
.Hence
to this
,the leader of these three Sweden
rise
to 1996 next 2 years the number
of theft was stable,however
,in 1998 it continued to grow.
The leader in theft numbers was Great Britain,which started with almost 20 thousand
applying them.At the ,beginning it had a gentle rise
till 1992,after that the number
decreased,however
, in the next years till 1996 it continued to rise
and in 1996 grew to 20 thousand
,but in the following years till the,end it carried to fall.Submitted by andriykolomiyets12 on
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