An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? 

What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?
It goes without saying that money’s invention has affected nations and
people
. One of the aspects that it has affected the most, is the
economy
of a
country
and
this
causes different
countries
to have non-identical economies; some of them are developed and some of them are not.
Due to
the fact that a
country
’s
economy
has so much effect on
people
,
professionals
try to immigrate to developed
countries
and it causes some
problems
.
Although
there are many
solutions
for
this
purpose, in what follows, the
problems
and
solutions
are elaborated
.
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Two significant
problems
coming to mind are in two categories;
country
and
people
. When a
country
has a poor
economy
, its money value is dropped significantly and
also
the price of goods is
increased
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. Since
people
of that
country
cannot afford their basic needs, the number of immigrant
professionals
increases. Regarding that, the
country
’s
economy
gets worse and
also
it causes not to have enough expertise
people
in different fields
such
as medicine, industry and agriculture.
In addition
, another problem which arises is the fact that immigrant
professionals
are separated from their families and
this
leads to emotional
problems
such
as missing the homeland and their families. Two main
solutions
for
this
purpose can be categorized as national and international. From the national point of view, poor
countries
should try to improve their
economy
and
also
provide more salaries and life opportunities
such
as free insurance or medication for
professionals
. From an international point of view, developed
countries
in the world must be united to help poor
countries
.
Although
developed
countries
do not mind having immigrants, the rights of non-immigrant
people
of poor
countries
should be considered as well and
that is
because all
people
deserve to have a peaceful and worthy lifestyle. To sum it all up, having considered all the
problems
and
solutions
aforementioned, I believe that
besides
the negative impacts of professional immigration on the
country
, each individual’s emotions must be considered and respected.
Hence
, all
countries
in the world must be united to improve the
economy
of destitute nationals, because every human deserves a better life.
However
, it was just a story in a nutshell and there are more
solutions
to be discussed. I wish every individual could work and live next to their families, in their homeland.
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