The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
The graph illustrates the
amount
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number
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of
tourists
that visited an unspecified Caribbean
island
from 2017 to 2020. The
tourists
are divided into the ones that stayed on a cruise ship and the ones that spent their time on the
island
.
Overall
, the number of
tourists
visiting
an
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Caribbean
island
increased over the observed period.
At
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the beginning, staying on an
island
was more popular,
however
,
at
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the end, more visitors opted for
accomodation
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accommodation
at
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on
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cruise ships. In 2010, the number of visitors using boats as a place to stay was about 250 000 before it doubled to
a
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half a million in 2011. After a dip to 2010’s levels in 2012, the amount of
tourist
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tourists
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in
this
category rose gradually up
untill
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until
2
millions
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, which was
recoreded
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recorded
in 2017. The
amount
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number
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of
tourists
sleeping on the
island
remained the same in 2010 and 2011 at 750 000.
Then
it steadily increased to exactly 1.5 million in 2013 and never went above that
threshshold
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threshold
.
Untill
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Until
the
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2015, the value had not
change
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, in 2016 it slightly decreased to roughly 1.25
millions
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million
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before it returned to the maximum of 1.5 million in 2017.
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