Some people believe that governments should have access to people’s mobile phone call records and messages for safety reasons. Others believe that this information is private and should not be available without permission. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubt that these days all of us seeking to live in

safety

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place and country. The question is

,

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if the

governments

have

an

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access

on

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our

mobiles

is that necessary to

safe

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us? In

this

question

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I am going to discuss my view and draw my personal conclusion. In terms of advantages, that could make our life more safety. The main reason given to support

this

claim is that some

of

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governments

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the governments

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have

an

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access

on

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citizen's

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mobiles

they have

high

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level of safety and

crimes

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rates are lower than

other

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in other

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countries they did not have it. To illustrate, if happened a crime or theft they can

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this

person

by

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his mobile.

In other words

, if the government has

an

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access

that

help

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us to live in safe and they can catch criminals in

short

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time.

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,

an

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access

on

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citizen's

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mobiles

infringes on personal privacy.

To begin

with, there

are

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many

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private

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information

should

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not be available for each one.

In other words

, every

citizen

should be feeling that

governments

respect their rights and protect their personal information.

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, people with

criminal

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the criminal

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mind

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or

terrorist

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they

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used old

mobiles

such

as NOKIA.

This

is because

governments

cannot track them as new

mobiles

. In conclusion,

although

could be safe when

governments

have

an

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access

on

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citizen's

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citizens'

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mobiles

but

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it is infringing their rights.

Therefore

, I believe that

governments

should have

a

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permission

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before it has

an

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access

on

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mobiles

. And they can have

an

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access

without permission if someone

have

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previous

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a previous

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crime.