Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that manufactured food and drink contain too much

sugar

. These high

level

Fix the agreement mistake

levels

show examples

of

sugar

may cause many health problems. Many people think that increasing the

price

of these

products

would reduce their consumption. High levels of

sugar

cause numerous diseases

such

as diabetes, obesity, skin problems,

for example

, acne, and heart problems

as a result

of being overweight. Increasing taxes on

products

which have high levels of

sugar

could lead to a decrease

Change preposition

in

show examples

the consumption of these very harmful foods and move consumers towards healthier

products

.

For example

, if a bottle of coke is sold at a higher

price

, the consumers, probably, will buy natural juice at the same

price

to replace the coke.

However

, In my opinion, changing only the taxes on these

products

to increase the

price

is not enough to reduce the

abuse

of

sugar

. Indeed

sugar

is addictive and so its

abuse

depends on many causes and it can't be reduced simply by operating on

price

.

According to

me , to reduce

sugar

abuse

, the government should promote the use of low carbohydrate

products

by arranging social awareness campaigns on TV and on the internet, reducing or eliminating taxes on organic foods and

also

attach

Wrong verb form

attaching

show examples

slogans about potential health issues on sugary

products

packaging so that people can be aware and take less amount of

sugar

in daily life.

To conclude

, it is necessary to reduce

sugar

abuse

because the diseases provocate by

this

abuse

have high costs for the community and for individuals and the authorities should make serious efforts to do so.