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Some people think that being able to communicate online is breaking geographical barriers and enabling people, who would never have the chance to meet, communicate online. What are the advantages of international communications? Are there any disadvantage too?

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online
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society with a lot of benefits and opportunities that
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 restricted by long distance in ancient times .There are
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merits of
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 across the globe
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 demerits only .
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both sides of online
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 . On the positive side of advancement in technology to enable people to be in contact with each
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 across the boundaries of one nation to
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 is to provide the public with a lot more opportunities in
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 of trade, business and education as well . In
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earlier
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folks were restricted
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 economically ,but nowadays they are able to explore more chances
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across
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 world via online
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 platforms like Skype, Zoom meetings and Microsoft Teams .To
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 an example , they can give presentations through these by sitting far away from the main location of
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 or flexible work .
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 , it is assisting the people to know more about the rituals and traditions of other cultures by connecting with the residents of
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 through
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Facebook
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, it
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also
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students to attain
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 education
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 residing in their home countries ,as most
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foreign
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 institutes are providing online education these days .To add more in favour of international communications , these are acting as
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 for many countries as they are able to boost their export
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and
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 are impacting their economy .
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in person
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 meetings which
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 effecting the body language and
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 of
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individuals like socialism .
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beautiful and different places manually which would stunt their knowledge .
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 , online communications have opened up many opportunities to society
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in
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 sector especially .So, merits are overshadowing the demerits somewhere.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural Exchange
  • Geographical barriers
  • Global knowledge
  • Diverse insights
  • Professional Networking
  • Language barriers
  • Privacy Concerns
  • Digital Divide
  • Cultural Misunderstandings
  • Non-verbal cues
  • Susceptible
  • Data breaches
  • Identity theft
  • Toleration and understanding
  • Foster
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