You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mary, Hope

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letter finds you in great health and mental peace. I've just got your mail asking about the great event of the parade of

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here in Egypt. I'm just writing to let you know more about how did it start, the reasons for the public endorsement and how much it relates to me. Let me first share the whole story with you. 2 weeks ago, the Egyptian government decided to make the whole world witness the revival of the pharaonic civilization.

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, there will be a royal march of all the ancient

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from the Egyptian museum in Cairo to a recently-established one in Aswan.

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has drawn the attention of people around the globe. For your information,

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to leave their first destination.

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could be risky

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, the Egyptian authority took the risk for the sake of boosting the touristry industry.

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story directly relates to me as You know my passion and interest in the history of Egypt.

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travelled to Aswan, definitely would I become able to visit them on a daily bases. Hope I was able to respond to some of your queries. Lots of love, Laila

ericssonsony551Sun Feb 19 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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229 words

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