You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mary, Hope
this
letter finds you in great health and mental peace. I've just got your mail asking about the great event of the parade of
mummies
here in Egypt. I'm just writing to let you know more about how did it start, the reasons for the public endorsement and how much it relates to me. Let me first share the whole story with you. 2 weeks ago, the Egyptian government decided to make the whole world witness the revival of the pharaonic civilization.
Consequently
, there will be a royal march of all the ancient
mummies
from the Egyptian museum in Cairo to a recently-established one in Aswan.
Secondly
,
he
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the
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uniquity of
such
an event is the main reason why
this
has drawn the attention of people around the globe. For your information,
this
is the first time
for
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the
mummies
to leave their first destination.
Moreover
,
Although
this
could be risky
due to
the fragility of these royal
mummies
, the Egyptian authority took the risk for the sake of boosting the touristry industry.
Finally
,
This
story directly relates to me as You know my passion and interest in the history of Egypt.
Therefore
, if the
mummies
travelled to Aswan, definitely would I become able to visit them on a daily bases. Hope I was able to respond to some of your queries. Lots of love, Laila
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