Some think that residents should responsible for keeping their areas clean and tidy, while others say it is the government’s responsibility.  Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

Some would argue that it is the main responsibility of the

people

to keep their place

cleaned

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hence

others

would say that

government

should be responsible.

Although

, some locals think that

government

should be more responsible because of the taxes being collected.

While

others

believe that cleanliness should

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among individuals. I believe that

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people

are the main responsibility

in

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for

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keeping the

community

clean. The

government

used the taxes that are being collected in keeping the

community

clean and many

people

appreciated

this

initiative. Since

people

's

schedule

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schedules

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nowadays become erratic and gruelling. For

others

, it was a huge relief

where

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they have to prioritize more important things

such

as earning money and family time.

For example

, in the Philippines, locals rely on

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community

workers in sweeping the road and collecting the garbages in their household. In my perspective,

people

become dependent and

this

act should not be tolerated.

On the other hand

, cleanliness in the surrounding area should be the main

responsibilty

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responsibility

of the residents.

This

character trait should be taught to youngsters to save the earth for

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future's

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generation

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generations

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.

Moreover

, it would help the

government

budget to allocate the funds

in

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more important aspects

such

as health and education rather

that

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than

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spending

in

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community

clean-up.

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, locals could cooperate in the beautification of the

surrounding

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surroundings

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and

this

would enhance

camaderie

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camaraderie

among

people

. I believe

this

act is preferable because

people

's cooperation is an important aspect

in

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preserving the

community

. In conclusion,

although

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apply

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others

believe that residents should entrust the maintenance of cleanliness

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the

government

.

Others

would argue that it is the responsibility of an individual to keep the surrounding clean and tidy. I believe

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this

is more effective in achieving a cleaner and fresher

community

.