Some think that residents should responsible for keeping their areas clean and tidy, while others say it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

Some would argue that it is the main responsibility of the

people

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to keep their place

cleaned

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others

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would say that

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should be responsible.

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, some locals think that

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should be more responsible because of the taxes being collected.

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others

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believe that cleanliness should

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among individuals. I believe that

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people

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are the main responsibility

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for

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keeping the

community

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clean. The

government

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used the taxes that are being collected in keeping the

community

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clean and many

people

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appreciated

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initiative. Since

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schedule

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nowadays become erratic and gruelling. For

others

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, it was a huge relief

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they have to prioritize more important things

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as earning money and family time.

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, in the Philippines, locals rely on

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community

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workers in sweeping the road and collecting the garbages in their household. In my perspective,

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become dependent and

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act should not be tolerated.

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, cleanliness in the surrounding area should be the main

responsibilty

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responsibility

of the residents.

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character trait should be taught to youngsters to save the earth for

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future's

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generation

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.

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, it would help the

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budget to allocate the funds

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more important aspects

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as health and education rather

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spending

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on

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community

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clean-up.

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, locals could cooperate in the beautification of the

surrounding

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and

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would enhance

camaderie

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camaraderie

among

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. I believe

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act is preferable because

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's cooperation is an important aspect

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of

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preserving the

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although

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others

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believe that residents should entrust the maintenance of cleanliness

in

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to

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the

government

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.

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would argue that it is the responsibility of an individual to keep the surrounding clean and tidy. I believe

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is more effective in achieving a cleaner and fresher

community

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