The diagram which illustrates processes of life cycle of a species of large fish named the salmon.
The graphic illustrates the life process of a large type of fish called
salmon
.
Overall
, the life cycle of the salmon
is a natural process and has three cyclical phase
. The beginning is the laying of the Change to a plural noun
phases
egss
and Correct your spelling
eggs
ending
as Wrong verb form
ends
full grown
Add a hyphen
full-grown
salmon
.
To begin
with, the hatching of the salmon
eggs is about 5-6 months in the nailbeds of the upper river which
the water flows slowly. After four years the Correct word choice
where
salmon
eggs becomes
fry measuring 3-5 cm that stays in the lower river where the current flows fast. In the lower river where the Change the verb form
become
salmon
grows between 12-15 cm and called as
"smolt".
The smolt swim into the open sea and stayed there for almost 5 years. Correct your spelling
a
Moreover
, the significant increase in the salmon
size ranging
from 70-76 cm Wrong verb form
ranges
where
it becomes adult. Correct word choice
when
This
cyclical phase can begin again.Submitted by namlaemy on
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