Young people who commit crimes should be treates in the same as adults who commit crime. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Adolescents who perpetrate crimes should be treated

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the same level as

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who perform a

crime

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. I totally disagree with

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statement because they still have no brain development as adults and they should be treated in

clinics

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to help them to recover their function in

society

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. On the one hand, these teens who perform a

crime

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have no maturity to understand the consequences of a

crime

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and

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need to be taken into consideration.

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, under the law, they are children or minors who have no legal

responsabilities

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responsibilities

for many social roles, and

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need

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when they commit a

crime

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.

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, many of these teenagers who commit a felony have no idea of the consequences they might have to face within

society

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because they still are immature.

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: in the city of California in 2019, a teen

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twenty people inside a

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and when he attended the court, he explained what he did with a big smile.

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, many of these young adolescents should be treated in

clinics

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to treat them in a more healthy environment.

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, they need to be treated to

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function

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again in

society

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with a new identity to avoid being recognized by others. It is well known that sending them to prison will not benefit them to become better human beings. To explain

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, in The U.K.

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adolescents who commit a violent

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crime

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crimes

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are helped by

treated

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them

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in mental

clinics

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, and the government gave them a new identity.

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, many of them become functional people within

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.

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, young people who commit a

crime

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should be taken into consideration that they are minors and have no understanding of what they are doing, so they really need to be treated in

clinics

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and not be

sending

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to

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prison. I totally believe

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is a preferable way of thinking to avoid them being

mental

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and physical abuse in jail.