Young people who commit crimes should be treates in the same as adults who commit crime. To what extent you agree or disagree?
Adolescents who perpetrate crimes should be treated
in
the same level as Change preposition
on
grown ups
who perform a Add a hyphen
grown-ups
crime
. I totally disagree with this
statement because they still have no brain development as adults and they should be treated in clinics
to help them to recover their function in society
.
On the one hand, these teens who perform a crime
have no maturity to understand the consequences of a crime
and this
need to be taken into consideration. Firstly
, under the law, they are children or minors who have no legal responsabilities
for many social roles, and Correct your spelling
responsibilities
this
need
to Change the verb form
needs
be apply
when they commit a Change the verb form
be applied
crime
. Secondly
, many of these teenagers who commit a felony have no idea of the consequences they might have to face within society
because they still are immature. For instance
: in the city of California in 2019, a teen murder
twenty people inside a Wrong verb form
murdered
theater
and when he attended the court, he explained what he did with a big smile.
Change the spelling
theatre
On the other hand
, many of these young adolescents should be treated in clinics
to treat them in a more healthy environment. Moreover
, they need to be treated to be
Unnecessary verb
apply
function
again in Replace the word
functional
society
with a new identity to avoid being recognized by others. It is well known that sending them to prison will not benefit them to become better human beings. To explain further
, in The U.K. the
adolescents who commit a violent Correct article usage
apply
crime
are helped by Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
treated
Add a missing verb
being treated
them
in mental Correct pronoun usage
apply
clinics
, and the government gave them a new identity. As a result
, many of them become functional people within society
.
To conclude
, young people who commit a crime
should be taken into consideration that they are minors and have no understanding of what they are doing, so they really need to be treated in clinics
and not be sending
to Change the form of the verb
sent
the
prison. I totally believe Correct article usage
apply
this
is a preferable way of thinking to avoid them being mental
and physical abuse in jail.Change the word
mentally
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