governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads . do you agree or disagree ?

One of the most controversial issues around the world is

a

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public transportation.

Meanwhile

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some

people

believe the government should invest more money

on

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railways

.And they think roads are less

importance

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than

railways

.I can neither agree nor disagree with

this

statement.And in

this

essay

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I will explain my opinion with some examples. On the one hand,public transportation

such

as

trains

are

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beneficial and vital for each country.

Trains

,first of all,can carry hundreds of

people

in

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each trip.The second reason is that

trains

are environment-friendly and they reduce the impact of carbon footprints by limiting the emission of carbon dioxide into the air.

In addition

,

people

can manage their time and avoid

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their time in traffic congestion.

Fore

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example

singapore

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railways

are really convenient and advanced and most

commuter

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commuters

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or other

people

in

the

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singapore

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use

trains

and because of

that

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they

dont

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do not

have any air

polutions

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pollution

pollutions

problem

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problems

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or traffic jams.All in all, the government should pay more attention to

railways

to encourage

people

use

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trains

.

On the other hand

,authorities should spend money

in

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other sectors of public

transports

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transport

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,

for instance

,

appropriate

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place

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places

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for riding a

bike

,or bus routes.

firstly

,some

people

have a tendency to

use

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the bike

a bike

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bike

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bikes

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for short distances.they can not only

use

tehir

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their

bike

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bikes

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whenever they want,but

also

it helps them to be healthy.

Besides

,some

people

have no access to train stations and they prefer

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use

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the bus that

it

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is near their

home

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or workplace.

furthermore

,using

bus

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,

bike

or private car

dont

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don't

need to

following

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a timetable or

changing

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train

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trains

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.

To sum up

,the

government

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duties in

this

vital issue should not be taken lightly.In my

prespective

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perspective

,with investment in both parts,

railways

and roads we can gain the desired result.