The diagram which illustrates processes of life cycle of a species of large fish named the salmon.
The life cycle of a
salmon
which belongs to a particular species of fish is illustrated in the flow chart.
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Salmon
fish has 3 stages in their lifecycle, which are named "fry", "Use synonyms
smolth
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smooth
salmon
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as well as
the river.
The infantile form("fry") lives in theLinking Words
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lower part of the river which is fast moving for about 4 years.Later, it migrates to the open sea, after which it evolves to the next stage called smolt which is approximately 12-15cm in size.
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age
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the age
salmon
matures to the adult form which lies in the upper stream. It mates with the opposite sex and lays eggs which sink to the bottom of the river. In suitable climatic ,conditions eggs hatch to form "fry' and the cycle repeats.Use synonyms
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