Prison sentences are often too light, and crime rates are growing in many major cities. Capital punishment is necessary and good Do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that the amount of crime increasing day by day.
however
, some people opine that prison laws are not strong enough
therefore
offence rates are increasing in important places in the country.
thus
, capital
punishment
is mandatory.I completely disagree with the thought because
according to
me there were several other options for decreasing the crime rate. on the one hand,individuals thought death is the only option for the lawbreaker because it is often common nowadays that criminals do crimes again even after they release from the completion of the
punishment
.
for instance
it was found on the survey that most of
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criminals recorded as ex-criminals .
In addition
due to
not strong enough laws people do not fear to do crimes nowadays . on the other ,hand there are certainly other options
instead
of direct capital
punishment
since
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ex-prisoners
also
become good citizens of the country later.
Although
it is a difficult task to educate criminals not to do crimes again .but ,with proper education at the prison during their
punishment
they not only understand whom to live in the community but
also
be part of the community in order to raise the nation in future. In conclusion ,I believe both arguments have their merits .on balance,
however
, I feel that capital
punishment
is not necessary at all times because there are some masses in prison who became good citizens of our societies in future.
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