Many automobile manafactueres created self-driving systems for their vehicles. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of releasing cars with these systems.
Nowadays, numerous car manufacturing enterprises equip self-driving systems for their products.
Due to
the fact that it brings consumers convenience and efficiency such
as saving time. Nevertheless
, there are drawbacks like error scale.
On the one hand, when a driver does not feel conscious or tired, they can set the journey, then
take a short rest in a long trip and let the car control automatically. Therefore
, they can become more concentrated on the rest of the trip and difficult roads, as
a result, it may decrease accident risks. Correct word choice
and as
Moreover
, humans can save their
time which needs to spend on controlling an automobile, Change the word
the
hence
solving working tasks, and deadlines when on the road is a good idea. For example
, numerous researches
show that buyers tend to choose vehicles with automatic driving thanks to Change the wording
types of research
pieces of research
kinds of research
its
diverse function and benefits.
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their
However
, plenty of errors from these technologies still remain, which leads to buyers can not believe in its
stability. Correct pronoun usage
their
In other words
, automatically driving means of transportation can be good at
several situations, Change preposition
in
in contrast
to various practical cases. Furthermore
, when it causes a catastrophic accident, the owner has difficulty to face up with the consequences. For instance
, a buyer bought a Tesla motor which was the latest version, unfortunately in one day he lost control his
motor and ran at maximum speed before colliding with a house. Change preposition
of his
Thus
, he died at a young age and Tesla recalled this
model for checking products'
errors.
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products
To sum up
, both kinds of vehicles have different advantages and disadvantages, and purchasers should consider carefully based on demand or safety.Submitted by duongducanh06 on
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