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The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers.

The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers.
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The table illustrates the
numbers
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 of native
speakers
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 of six languages and the
number
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 of
speakers
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 using them as their second
language
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.
Overall
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, there is the highest rate of native Mandarin Chinees
speakers
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as well as
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 the highest total
number
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 of
speakers
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 of
this
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language
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. Familiarly, English is the
language
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 which most
of
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speakers
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the speakers
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using
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use
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 as their second
language
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 and it has the highest rate of
total
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a total
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number
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 of
speakers
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. It can be inferred from the table that 900
million
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speakers
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using
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use
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 Mandarin
Chineese
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Chinese
 as their native
language
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, which can be seen as the highest
number
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 out of six categories,
as well as
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 its highest total
number
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 of
speakers
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, with 1090
million
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speakers
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. English is the
langage
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language
 that has the largest
number
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 of
speakers
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 as an additional
language
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 and the highest
number
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 of
speakers
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 in total, which is reported at 190
million
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 and 942
million
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 respectively.
On the other hand
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, Portuguese has the lowest
number
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 of native
speakers
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, with only 203
million
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 people and the less remarked
number
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 of
speakers
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 in total, about 213
million
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.
Similiarly
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Similarly
, only 24
million
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 people
using
Wrong verb form
use
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 Arabic as their additional
langage
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language
, which can be seen as the lowest
number
Use synonyms
 compared to that of others.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words speakers, number, language, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 9 times.
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