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The Government should allocate more funding to teaching science than to other subjects so that the country can develop. Do you agree or disagree?

#government #science #subjects #country
It is a common phenomenon when
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 of the
state
 budget is not spent
for
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 improving
science
, specifically in developing countries.
Nevertheless
, in order to ameliorate a country, the government has a responsibility to release more cost for
science
 than other fields. I strongly believe in
earlier
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 perspective,
then
, in the following paragraphs, I shall elucidate my paradigm.
To begin
 with, investing multitudinous money
for
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 applied
science
 will help the government to discover new innovations which will improve numerous aspects
in
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 human life.
For instance
, China invested countless
budget
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budgets
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 in
communication
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 ecosystem many years ago,
therfore
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therefore
, nowadays,
this
 country holds a plethora of
licencies
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licenses
 on 4G technology.
As a result
, people from different areas in
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state
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 shall relish
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 technology when they exert the extraordinary communication system.
Additionally
,
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policy
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 which is
representation
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a representation
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 of detailing on
science
 can make
better
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a better
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 life for us. Turning to another point, giving attention to
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scientific subjects like funding
the
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medicine
researchs
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research
 may make some countries
to
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obliterate many diseases.
For example
, a number of countries like China,
USA
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the USA
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, and
UK
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the UK
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 made vaccines to finish Covid-19
as
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a pandemic couple of years ago, and it can be concluded that they invested massive
state
 budgets
to
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 their
medicine
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 experiments in order to create a perfect drug.
Consequently
, they could solve
pandemic
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the pandemic
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 issue by creating communal immunity from vaccine mandatory.
Moreover
, based on that trend will make sure that people can reach healthy life as one of
necessary
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the necessary
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 actions to improve the
state
.
To conclude
,
focussing
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 huge cost
for
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the
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teaching
science
 can develop the country. Several outputs from previous
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such
 as giving opportunities to the society to exert exceptional technologies and finishing problems which
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 caused by
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global diseases make me stand on a position that the executive members should
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optimaze
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optimize
science
 by funding it more than the other fields.
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