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The table below shows the population changes of several animal types from 1977 to 1990. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the population changes of several animal types from 1977 to 1990. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The number of wildlife
population
 changes of bears, dolphins, and whales from 2011 to 2016 is depicted in the given line graph, the figure being mentioned in thousands.
Overall
, it can be seen that there is an upward trend in the figure for the bears' community,
while
 that of dolphins experienced a downward trend. Another critical point is that the
population
 changes of the bears saw the most significant change in comparison to the others. In 2011, the total of bears was the lowest among three different animal types, accounting for nearly 10
thousand
.
However
, those saw a surge in 2013, with nearly 100
thousand
.
Moreover
, the number of bears increased considerably and reached a peak in 2016 with about 170
thousand
, and it became the highest in others.
By contrast
, the figure for
dolphin
Correct article usage
the dolphin
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population
 in 2011 was the highest with 150
thousand
.
However
, those experienced a significant decrease to less than 50
thousand
 in 2013 and hit a trough in 2016 with 0.
In addition
, the sum
whales
Change the noun form
whale
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population
 was approximately 70
thousand
 in 2011. Those fluctuated throughout the period, and compared to 2011, the number of dolphins underwent a slight decrease to about 60
thousand
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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