Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospitsal. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter -explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital -say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do -give details of when you would be available for this work

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Dear Sir or
Madaam
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Madam
, I am writing
this
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letter because
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saw your advertisement that you need
voluntary
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a voluntary
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worker
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in the hospital. I want to volunteer even if
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dont
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don't
get
salary
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a salary
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for
this
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one because
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want to give back to the community and
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believe doing voluntary
work
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can improve my personality and help many people.
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encourage
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with
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my
mother
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, because my
mother
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is
community
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health worker in our small town,
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remember almost
everyday
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every day
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saw my
mother
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helping many people with no salary,
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thats
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that's
why
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want
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to try just like my
mother
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. I can do any available
work
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. I
dont
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don't
have experience in hospital
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but
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can do cleaning the room or pick
the
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up the
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trash can and hospital waste. I am free every weekend,
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Saturday
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and
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and can do voluntary
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from 8;am to 5 pm. Respectfully yours, Rubenel Laurino
Submitted by rubenellaurino on

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • volunteer
  • unpaid work
  • free time
  • dedication
  • healthcare
  • assist
  • patients
  • administrative tasks
  • commitment
  • flexibility
  • personal satisfaction
  • inspired
  • community service
  • contribute
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