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Volcanoes which has so many drawbacks.To what extent dp you agree or fis agree?

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Summary of volcano We can see that our
planet
 shown in the picture is unique in the solar system.
This
 essay will show you how a remarkable
planet
 works.
Firstly
,the oceans have the power of life and death over all living things.
Secondly
,the atmosphere drives our climate.
Thirdly
,
the
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 ice changes the course of human evolution.
lastly
, destructive
volcanoes
 are part of a global system.They save the
planet
 from the
biggeest
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biggest
 crises in the world.It is shown that in
lava
 in
Africa
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 there is no water,shelter or even life except
few
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 snakes.
This
 volcano has a permanent lake of mut
in
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lava
 its create of .The
lava
 was at
it's
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 most spectacular at night.Eventually, The process of molten rocks charming away below the
surface
 affects our entire
planet
.There is a crack on the
Earth
's
surface
 that runs for hundreds of kilometresThe hot plum of rock on our
Earth
 is a hundred
kilometers
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 weighed and at least 6
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hundreds
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kilometers
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 deep. The air
surface
 is broken up into 7 chunks called plates.The ultimate cause of moving continents is that through the spreading process in the landscape,the
Earth
's crust is very slowly driving the part.
For instance
 ,the
lava
earth
 in lake Alley .The collision between plates creates mountain ranges .The inner hit in the
Earth
 has made
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different
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 in our
planet
such
 as
volcano
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 activity which helps create the right conditions for the most important change in the history of our
planet
. Ultimately,
volcanoes
 provided the
surface
 of our young
planet
 with warmth,water and chemicals which are poisonous. The gas that gets out of
volcanoes
 is carbon dioxide.The carbon
dioxids
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dioxide
 drawbacks
is
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 that it affects
on
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climate change,
whereas
 They are useful to some factors too.their benefits are providing the young
Earth
 from frizzing over
besides
 evolution related to it.As
volcanoes
 continue to erupt, levels of carbon dioxide
are
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steadily top in the atmosphere.
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