The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured
The diagram below illustrates the process of manufacturing instant noodles.
First,
is delivering flour to the storage silos, which later on is transferred to the mixer where it is mixed with the water and oil. After mixture
is made it is rolled out on a roller as dough sheets and goes through the roller machine where it is cut into strips.
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the mixture
Next,
noodls
go through the roller again and come out rounded , Correct your spelling
noodles
then
it is mixed with the cooking oil and is
left to dry .Once noodles are dry, as the final step they are poured into the cups and seasoned with vegetables and spices and labelled and sealed.Unnecessary verb
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