The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured
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The diagram below illustrates the process of manufacturing instant noodles.
First,
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is delivering flour to the storage silos, which later on is transferred to the mixer where it is mixed with the water and oil. After
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the mixture
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is made it is rolled out on a roller as dough sheets and goes through the roller machine where it is cut into strips.
Next,
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noodls
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noodles
go through the roller again and come out rounded ,
then
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it is mixed with the cooking oil and
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left to dry .Once noodles are dry, as the final step they are poured into the cups and seasoned with vegetables and spices and labelled and sealed.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • mixing ingredients
  • dough preparation
  • sheeting
  • steaming
  • cutting techniques
  • dehydration
  • deep-frying
  • cooling system
  • packaging
  • quality control
  • production line
  • mass production
  • food preservation
  • convenience food
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