The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates the steps involved in processing soft
cheese
.
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Overall
, it can be seen from the graph that making soft Linking Words
cheese
undergoes five steps until it is ready to be consumed. At Use synonyms
first,
water and milk are mixed and Linking Words
then
stored for cooling at 5 Linking Words
degrees
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Celsius
for 2 hours.Use synonyms
Next,
the liquid is fermented by adding salt and is cooled at 35 Linking Words
degrees
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celsius
for another 2 hours.After that, steam is evaporated from the fermented Use synonyms
cheese
at 100 Use synonyms
degrees
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Celsius
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Finally
, the thickened liquid is transferred to the soft Linking Words
cheese
filter where it is stored for cooling for 8 hours at 5 Use synonyms
degrees
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Celsius
. Excess liquid from Use synonyms
cheese
is filtered through a separate filter.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cheese, degrees, celsius with synonyms.
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