Last weekend, your cousin celebrated her 50th birthday, but you couldn't attend and you forgot to cancel. Write a letter to your cousin. In your letter: Apologize for missing the birthday celebration Explain why you missed it and why you hadn't let her know Describe how you will make it up to her

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Dear Suman, I hope you are doing well. I'm wishing you belated warm and best wishes on your 50th B'day. I wish you enjoyed your Birthday party attend your party. That I 'm terribly sorry that didn't attend it. I completely forgot about it when I Saw your Facebook story

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I felt blue. The reason why I didn't make it was my hectic schedule

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my sickness.

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, my boss got a new project that we completed just in two days. I burnt the midnight oil by staying at my office.

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, it skips my mind. Please forgive me, I should've told you before. But don't worry, I'll definitely celebrate with you again. How about, If we will meet at your house on Sunday

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, we will go to the movie.

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sounds perfect to me how about you? If it'll work that would be great. Please let me know as soon as possible,

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I will book tickets for both of us. Looking for meeting you and enjoying your B'day. Best wishes, Harwinder.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

177 words

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