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In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is greater than in the past. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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These days, people are getting married considerably later compare with decades ago.
As a
result
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 the
age
 difference between parents and their children is essentially great. Some people believe that they are wrong with it because it hurts many aspects of life.
However
, others think that
this
 development has a plethora of benefits. I personally side with the former view which will be discussed in
this
 essay.
To begin
 with, having children
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in
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an
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 older
age
 has many health issues. The chance to have a baby is the biggest problem. Scientists from Germany have proved that the chance to make a baby
higher
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in
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 a young
age
instead
 of in old
age
.
Moreover
, mental diseases are considered
as
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an issue. Recently,
the
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professor D. from Kazakh National University announced that the people get older
the
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make
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 a choice is harder. It means that
person
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people
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 when
their
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 40 wanted a partner with the same emotional and educational level as they are and
consequently
 to find
such
this
 person is more difficult.
In addition
, one of the great Kazakh writer and philosopher said that you are better to grow up with your child. What he means by saying
this
 is that life is more interesting with getting older with
own
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 child and you
are get
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 closer. Take
human
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 being one hundred years ago as an example. In most parts of the
world
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 the
age
 of 20 was considered too late for getting married.
As a result
,
young
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the young
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 generation
were
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 more aware
in
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of
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 life. In conclusion, it’s much better
having
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to have
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 children
in
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at
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 younger
age
 still
that
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than
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 in mid-
age
. In my opinion, it is a fact that nowadays
difference
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 in
age
 is greater than in the past. But I strongly disagree with
benefits
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 of that outweigh
drawbacks
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the drawbacks
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.
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