Change is brought about by governments and big institutions. Individuals can do nothing. To what extent to you agree?

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In today’s world, making substantial
changes
in society has always been a major concern for every
nation
. Some public believe that governments and high-value institutions are majorly responsible for big
changes
in society. In my opinion, I would argue that it is the individual who is responsible to start from one and making it to 100, with his strength, determination, and being an example for possibilities that leads society to major development.
However
, it has always been seen that many big
changes
are brought by governments and institutions, which are fast and necessary to follow.
For example
, the Indian government made an announcement overnight to ban the 1000 rupee notes to stop fake money circulation in the market, which was responsible for terror activities and their funding. To stop that, a harsh and sudden announcement left the population anxious, worried and restless. And there was a big queue outside all banks in the
nation
to switch the note to different denominations. Though tough at the beginning, after some time positive
changes
were seen. So, the government and big institutions have the power to bring modification immediately and faster.
Nevertheless
, the transformation starts with an individual. It is individual courage that leads to the majority.
For instance
, Nelson Mandela was kept in prison on an island for more than a decade by White people. When he was released, at that time he had full power to send them out of the country, but he didn't
instead
he forgive them and decided to unite all and made the dream of the rainbow country possible. His determination
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and strength of heart made
this
big revolution possible.
Also
, when an individual show their best version, it creates waves of possibility among people like if he/she can do it. I too. They don't switch, stay solidly grounded, and we too can be there and support them. Say
for example
, how Mahatma Gandhi started as an individual and created forced the
nation
to make India independent. It is the individual best version that allows other public to advance themselves and bring a major change in the world or a
nation
. In my conclusion,
although
the government is the one who has the most power to bring change, I would argue that transformation in the community starts from a person; leading it to the majority. It is individual strength, courage and determination that
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an impactful and intensive development.
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