Some people think that once a person becomes a criminal, he will always be a criminal. Do you agree with this statement.

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widely claimed that once an individual becomes a criminal

this

stereotype will

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consistantly

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consistently

continue to happen in the future. My reasons why I

disgree

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disagree

with

this

statement will be elaborated

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this

essay.

To begin

with, it is inevitable that

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number of criminals

has

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increasing

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nowadays and caused

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society to

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trust

on

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these

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type of behaviour even though they

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that it will not happen again. Take a thrive

for instance

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this

action that

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objects from others since they were young and always be able to get away from it based on the law, leading them to believe that it is not dangerous to repeat that action again in the future.

Therefore

, it is sensible that some agree that a criminal cannot

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and always will continuously make it.

However

, some people argue that a person

become

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a criminal

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because

of

their

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emergency reason or unfortunately it

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to be happened because of a problem that they are facing.

For example

, a criminal

that

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robs someone' house to find some

cashs

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cash

or

value

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items in order to feed their children at home

due to

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personal financial problem. From

this

perspective, I strongly disagree with

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statement and the community should consider

this

action based on their circumstances which

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happend

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happened

for

essencial

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essential

reasons

behide

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behind

it. In conclusion,

although

it is undeniable that

criminal

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crime

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is

unexceptable

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unacceptable

in our society and the government should tackle

this

problem seriously, I am of the opinion that the individual criminal should be considered by their circumstances.