The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.
The diagrams illustrate the original map of the
school
site in 2004 and the development plan for 2024.
Overall
, a lot of modification can be observed, The institution will have more car park in 2024. And, the new road will connect them together. Meanwhile, there will be more school
buildings which enable the school
to have more students for 400 people while
the size of the sports
field
is smaller.
According to
the current map, There are consisting of three main buildings which are two school
buildings and one sports
field
, as well as
, one car park. The capacity of the institute is 600 students. With regard to the walkway, there is only one path from the main entrance to the sports
field
.
In the future, the school
plan to increase the number of parking
lot Add an article
the parking
along with
the construction of the new road. Moreover
, school
building 1 and 2 will be connected. Whereas
, the length of the path will be shorter starting from conjunction to building 3. Furthermore
, the sports
field
will be located next to the new car park and the building will be smaller. And, the capacity of the new site is 1,000 students.Submitted by pnichapat.s on
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