The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one are of Britian. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distribiuted.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one are of Britian. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distribiuted.
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The table shows the data on the budget sources
police
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gained from 2017 to 2018,
while
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pie charts illustrate the spending of
police
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in Britain in the same period.
Overall
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, It is noticeable that the main income of British
police
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comes from the national government for both years an average of 176
million
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.
Whereas
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, the majority of spending went to the salaries of officers and staff. Even though the percentage of staff salaries decreased in 2017, it still took more than half of
overall
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spending.
According to
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the
police
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cost, the national government provides the highest proportion of the
police
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budget compared to other sources. It was 175.5
million
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and increased to 177.8
million
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in 2018. In the same way, money from local taxes has levelled off to 102.3
million
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from 91.2
million
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in 2017.
While
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grants give a similar amount of income of 38
million
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in both years. With regard to the pie charts, most of the income was spent on officers' salaries. It took 75% and 69% in 2017 and 2018, respectively. Yet, the level of money used for building and transport was identical to 17% in 2017 and 2018.
On the other hand
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, there was an increase in the budget for technological parts from 8% in 2017 to 14% in 2018.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words police, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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