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You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

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Dear Ann, It's been so long since we were in touch but I haven't forgotten the wonderful time we spent together
last
 year. I hope everything going well for you. I have attended Duren Carnival
last
 week. I thought I should have shared my experience with you, and it will be worth you to visit the carnival. The main attraction of the carnival is the literature festival. As a
book
 writer, you have an opportunity to introduce your new
book
 at the festival. Authors are invited to the carnival to promote their books and facilitate a small group discussion about the
book
. The carnival is conducted by the city authority of Duren. I have contacted over there, it may help you to introduce your
book
 in the following week. You should have to stay at my home in Duran. I have a spare bedroom on the ground floor. I will bake a strawberry cake, your favourite, though I am a disaster in the kitchen. Let me know your flight time.I will pick up you from the airport, I can't wait to see you again. With love, Jennifer.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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