The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the
number
of closed Use synonyms
shops
and new Use synonyms
shops
in one country from 2011 to 2018.
Use synonyms
It is clear that
the Linking Words
number
of new Use synonyms
shops
declined rapidly from 8500 in 2011 to 4000 in 2012, which dropped by more than half. Use synonyms
While
the Linking Words
number
of shop closures was only seen a slight decrease, which is 500.
Use synonyms
According to
the line graph, the Linking Words
number
of openings reached a peak point at about 7000 in 2013 and reached a bottom point at about 500 in 2015, with some big fluctuation. Use synonyms
Whereas
, in 2015, the Linking Words
number
of shop closures was 4000 which was higher than its counterpart.
the Use synonyms
number
of new Use synonyms
shops
and shop closures was similar in 2014, which is around 6500. From 2015 to 2016, the Use synonyms
number
of openings fluctuated, keeping at 4000, and it was seen a slight increase from 2016 to 2017.Use synonyms
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