The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the
number
of closed shops
and new shops
in one country from 2011 to 2018.
It is clear that
the number
of new shops
declined rapidly from 8500 in 2011 to 4000 in 2012, which dropped by more than half. While
the number
of shop closures was only seen a slight decrease, which is 500.
According to
the line graph, the number
of openings reached a peak point at about 7000 in 2013 and reached a bottom point at about 500 in 2015, with some big fluctuation. Whereas
, in 2015, the number
of shop closures was 4000 which was higher than its counterpart.
the number
of new shops
and shop closures was similar in 2014, which is around 6500. From 2015 to 2016, the number
of openings fluctuated, keeping at 4000, and it was seen a slight increase from 2016 to 2017.Submitted by lindyz0624 on
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