You want to go camping for a week with a group of friends. Write a letter to the campsite manager. In your letter • ask them to send you some information about the campsite • find out about the cost • give information about your likely arrival time

Dear Sir or Madam My name is Mostafa and I am writing

this

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letter to get some data about the next

camping

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camp

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with, there are many of information I would like to know like the location, the duration, what kind of clothes I bring, any special shoes and tolls.

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, I have a group of friends who prefer to join us, so please let me know the maximum free seats for my friends.

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, it is allowed for males only or females can share?

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, is the cost per person including the food or shall we get it with us

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And if we have to get the food, please give us advice on which kinds are the best.

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but not least, we suggest arriving on May 27 morning , so let me know if

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date is suitable or if we have to change it with your recommendation. Yours faithfully Mostafa

mustafaelmalah1Tue Jun 17 2025

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Make sure to ask specific questions clearly and separately to improve clarity.

coherence cohesion

Use connecting words to guide the reader through the letter better.

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The letter has a clear purpose and outlines several questions.

coherence cohesion

The letter uses a polite and formal greeting and closing, which is good for tone.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

155 words

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