The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how carbonated drinks are manufactured.
Overall
, the process contains five main stages, beginning with water
cleaning and ending with packaging suitable for purchase.
First of all, raw water
contained in warehouses is sent to a filter for cleaning of impurities by special equipment, where water
is also
softened and added some chemicals. Following
this
, water
is pumped to electric heaters where the water
is heated and went through a cooling pipe to cool down the water
. After that, some carbon dioxides enriched the water
and the carbonated water
flowed into the mixing tank.
In the following step, water
is mixed in a device called the mixing tank adding to the water
colour and flavour and syrup. Next,
water
went through the filter again to be packed in bottles and cans. Subsequently
, the ready water
is sealed in boxes with a mark of drinks and sent to supermarkets by trunks ready to consume.Submitted by zbirliknur01 on
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