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The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
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The line chart depicts the percentage of people
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age
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of
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65 and above in the US,
Japan
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 and
Sweden
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 over the 100-year period. Looking for an
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 perspective, it is readily apparent that the studied period
whitnessed
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 the most dramatic increase in
Japan
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's ratio of people
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age 65 and above,
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 it started having the least one.
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 what is shown, Both America and
Sweden
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 showed an upward trend.
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 the beginning, the percentage in
these two nation
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 were at around 9% and 7% respectively, before
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 started increasing at the same pace,
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, until the US proportion reached 15% and
Sweden
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's 14% by 1982. In
1982
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-2000 period,
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the ratio of
population
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 aged 65 and over in
Sweden
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 fluctuated splattered in the USA, despite
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a slight decrease at approximately 14%. By 2040, both America and
Sweden
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 will so
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surge at the same pace and finish at around 23% and 25% respectively.
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 to America and
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, in 1940
Japan
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 had by far the lowest population aged 65 and above among these three distinct countries, at 5%. Not until 2040, when the ratio of people
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the
age
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of
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65 and over in
Japan
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 will exceed the two other countries at almost 27%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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