You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the
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data
datas
on the underground railway network in six different cities (London, Paris Tokyo, Washington, Correct your spelling
data
kyoto
and Change the capitalization
Kyoto
Los
Angeles
)
Overall
, As seen from information
,London had the oldest and the largest train network system Correct article usage
the information
where as
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whereas
Los
Angeles
was the latested
station compared with other cities.
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latest
Firstly
, London station was established in 1863 with 394 km of route and 775 million passengers per
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apply
annual
.Change the word
annually
On the other hand
,interesting points was
Paris and Tokyo were the two countries which opened systems in 1900 and 1927 with 199 and 155 respectively routes way but largest passenger per Correct subject-verb agreement
were
year
1191 and 1927 respectively.
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the year
Furthermore
, kyoto
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Kyoto
Los
Angeles
both
established recently in 1981 and 2001 with Add a missing verb
were both
less
routes areas 11 and 28 respectively with Change the quantifier
fewer
average
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an average
45
million's passengers. Change preposition
of 45
Additionally
Washington was the earliest and largest railway station Add a comma
,Additionally
compare
toWrong verb form
compared
2
above countries Correct article usage
the 2
kyoto
and Change the capitalization
Kyoto
Los
Angeles
which is established in 1976 with 126
km long route Correct article usage
a 126
and144
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and 144
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a millions
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million
millions
people.Correct your spelling
million
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words los, angeles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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