You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The table illustrates the
Correct your spelling
data
datas
Correct your spelling
data
on the underground railway network in six different cities (London, Paris Tokyo, Washington,
kyoto
Change the capitalization
Kyoto
show examples
and
Los
Angeles
)
Overall
, As seen from
information
Correct article usage
the information
show examples
,London had the oldest and the largest train network system
where as
Correct your spelling
whereas
show examples
Los
Angeles
was the
latested
Correct your spelling
latest
station compared with other cities.
Firstly
, London station was established in 1863 with 394 km of route and 775 million passengers
per
Change preposition
apply
show examples
annual
Change the word
annually
show examples
.
On the other hand
,interesting points
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
show examples
Paris and Tokyo were the two countries which opened systems in 1900 and 1927 with 199 and 155 respectively routes way but largest passenger per
year
Change the article
the year
show examples
1191 and 1927 respectively.
Furthermore
,
kyoto
Change the capitalization
Kyoto
show examples
and
Los
Angeles
both
Add a missing verb
were both
show examples
established recently in 1981 and 2001 with
less
Change the quantifier
fewer
show examples
routes areas 11 and 28 respectively with
average
Correct article usage
an average
show examples
45
Change preposition
of 45
show examples
million's passengers.
Additionally
Add a comma
,Additionally
show examples
Washington was the earliest and largest railway station
compare
Wrong verb form
compared
show examples
to
2
Correct article usage
the 2
show examples
above countries
kyoto
Change the capitalization
Kyoto
show examples
and
Los
Angeles
which is established in 1976 with
126
Correct article usage
a 126
show examples
km long route
and144
Correct your spelling
and 144
Correct article usage
a millions
show examples
Fix the agreement mistake
million
show examples
millions
Correct your spelling
million
show examples
people.
Submitted by cerjanaacharya.18 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words los, angeles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: