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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others belive that some imformation is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

#people #information #research #business #world #belive #imformation
There are competing views on whether to share scientific
research
informations
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information
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to
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with
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public
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the public
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 freely or not. In my opinion,
people
 can do both
of
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beliefs
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their beliefs
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 based on
researchers
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researchers'
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 or companies’
goal
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 whether for humanity or for running
business
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a business
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. In
this
 essay, I will share my point of view about these opinions.
People
 who think sharing
about
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scientific
research
information
 freely
to
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with
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people
 may concern
to
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 the discovery
for
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 human well-being. Take,
for example
, those who want to prevent
from
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coronavirus infection. A lot of media from different resources inform how to avoid the infection
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so that
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that
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 public could find the
information
 easily. I cannot imagine if the researchers do not want to give their knowledge for virus prevention freely. I believe, there will be more
people
 dying, particularly
from
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the
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poor family.
On the other hand
, others do not want to publish
the
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scientific
research
information
 because they are afraid
if
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public
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the public
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 knowing the formula invention. We can see the cosmetics companies compete to
atract
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attract
 women to use their products.
Hence
, they always update their knowledge to improve the products but conceal the detail of ingredients. Their discoveries are sensitive to share to prevent
the
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imitation from
the
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rivals. Of course, the company may do it since
the
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their purpose
not
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 for humanitarian reasons but for business.
To conclude
, I believe, the
information
 could be published or not depending on the
research
 purpose.
People
 should give
information
 if it is for human well-being reasons.
While
,
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 they can keep secret the
information
 if it is for business.
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