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air pollution is one of the largest problems facing the world today. what are its causes and what measures can be proposed to solve this problem

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Global warming has become a serious concern for many countries, and one of the widely faced issues relates to that
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pollution
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pollution
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 which largely involves an increasing number of vehicles and the effect of industrialization. There are numerous
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 related to
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 issue.
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, there is no problem without a solution.
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 with, one of the most important
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 related to health
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, which is deeply similar to human life and cause many diseases,
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 as eye irritation, premature newborn babies is nothing but the most significant problem it can affect nature
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 animal, trees, rivers and destroy ozone layers, melting glacier, it affects eco-system and water resources and global warming.
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 numerous solution to these
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. And one of the best ways to tackle
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 vexingly complicated issues is by utilizing environmentally friendly transportation and renewable energy rather than sulphur dioxide.
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, if a passenger can reach a destination in less time and cost as compared to going in a private vehicle, he will prefer public transport over private and
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,  there will be a drastic reduction in private cars. Another solution is planting trees and expanding forests and
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 checking up on cars.
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 in today's more and more
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pollution
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This
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 essay discussed how
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pollution
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 is often caused by private vehicles and power plants and provided conceivable solutions.
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