You have recently read a book about a city you know well and found some incorrect information. Write a letter to the author. In your letter tell him/her of the incorrect information give him/her the correct information explain why they should correct it.
Dear Sir,
I am writing that letter to inform you about a mistake I discovered
while
reading one of the articles in the City week book of the January 2023 edition.
To begin
with,I am a keen lover of the City Week magazine and never missed reading any version, all the essays are phenomenal and enlightening. However
, while
I was through the article about Lalbag Fort.Moreover
, I noticed erroneous data for which I wanted to grab your attention. Kindly note that in the section regarding “History of Lalbag Fort” given on page number 15, paragraph 1, it is written that “The Mughal prince Muhammad Azam Shah, third son of Aurangzeb started the work of the fort in 1778 during his vice-royalty in Bengal”, but the correct data should be that “The Mughal prince Muhammad Azam Shah, third son of Aurangzeb started the work of the fort in 1678 during his vice-royalty in Bengal”.
Nevertheless
,many readers might not observe it, since this
is very crucial information for the castle's archive and may misguide someone.In addition
,I request you ameliorate the subject section in the subsequent copy.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
yours faithfully,
TesaSubmitted by Alma Islam on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite