Some people think that subjects like arts, music, drama and creative writing contribute more towards a child's overall development. The school curriculum should provide more time for these subjects to be taught if the school wants all-round development of children.

Few sections of society prefer to think that

subjects

, namely arts, music, drama and creative writing

provides

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more towards a

student

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overall

growth.

As a result

, the school syllabus should

gives

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more

time

for these

subjects

to be taught for the purpose of

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development of juveniles. I

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agree with

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statement.

This

essay will substantiate my views with relevant examples followed by the conclusion. To embark with, including these creative

acivities

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activities

in the syllabus have many benefits.

Firstly

, these

subjects

require creativity and distinct imagination to

excell

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excel

, as a

concequence

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consequence

, a pupil can

deveop

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develop

different skills.

For instance

, in any well-known

paintings

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there is

a

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great imagination

,

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if

student

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a student

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focuses to paint creatively, in the way it thrives his thinking process.

In addition

, the student can

chose

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their carrier path in the stream that he or she has passion

on

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it

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.

Thus

, it allows pupils to focus more on their

intrested

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interested

subject.

On the other hand

, there are some downsides, nowadays the mother

tounge

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tongue

languages

are being endangered

due to

giving more preference to the main

academeic

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academic

subjects

like maths, physics,

biology

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. If the school management provides more

time

to

extracurcular

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extracurricular

extra-curricular

subjects

,

then

there is no

time

left for

the

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languages

.

Hence

, these

subjects

become major threats to the

languages

. To illustrate, my sister studies in

the

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school that includes

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subjects

, and dance classes, and their focus is on

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, but they neglected

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the telugu

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telugu

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language,

as a

result

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she does not know how to read or write

telugu

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.

To conclude

, the creative

subjcets

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subjects

play a pivotal role to thrive

child's

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a child's

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thinking ability and creativity,

besides

it is a threat to

languages

, I believe providing restricted

time

to those

subjets

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subjects

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is lucrative for the children.