Some people think that subjects like arts, music, drama and creative writing contribute more towards a child's overall development. The school curriculum should provide more time for these subjects to be taught if the school wants all-round development of children.
Few sections of society prefer to think that
subjects
, namely arts, music, drama and creative writing provides
more towards a Change the verb form
provide
student
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student's
overall
growth. As a result
, the school syllabus should gives
more Change the verb form
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time
for these subjects
to be taught for the purpose of Correct article usage
the all-round
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development of juveniles. I Correct your spelling
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essay will substantiate my views with relevant examples followed by the conclusion.
To embark with, including these creative acivities
in the syllabus have many benefits. Correct your spelling
activities
Firstly
, these subjects
require creativity and distinct imagination to excell
, as a Correct your spelling
excel
concequence
, a pupil can Correct your spelling
consequence
deveop
different skills. Correct your spelling
develop
For instance
, in any well-known paintings
there is Add a comma
,paintings
a
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,
if Remove the comma
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student
focuses to paint creatively, in the way it thrives his thinking process. Correct article usage
a student
In addition
, the student can chose
their carrier path in the stream that he or she has passion Change the verb form
choose
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for
it
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Thus
, it allows pupils to focus more on their intrested
subject.
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interested
On the other hand
, there are some downsides, nowadays the mother tounge
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tongue
languages
are being endangered due to
giving more preference to the main academeic
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academic
subjects
like maths, physics, biology
. If the school management provides more Correct word choice
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time
to extracurcular
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extracurricular
extra-curricular
subjects
, then
there is no time
left for the
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languages
. Hence
, these subjects
become major threats to the languages
. To illustrate, my sister studies in the
school that includes Correct article usage
a
advance
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subjects
, and dance classes, and their focus is on english
, but they neglected Change the capitalization
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the telugu
telugu
language, Change the capitalization
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as a
result
she does not know how to read or write Add the comma(s)
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telugu
.
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To conclude
, the creative subjcets
play a pivotal role to thrive Correct your spelling
subjects
child's
thinking ability and creativity, Correct article usage
a child's
besides
it is a threat to languages
, I believe providing restricted time
to those subjets
is lucrative for the children.Correct your spelling
subjects
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